look forward to more
July 17th, 2011 at 09:22am
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shes got the crazys.
I Can't Make A Sound To Somehow Capture Your Attention - Comments
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July 11th, 2011 at 01:08am
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Like it!July 1st, 2011 at 03:54am
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Heh imma bout to post the next chapter up to I Own You...
So yeahh....July 1st, 2011 at 01:15am -
Y'know what I hate?
When I read a good story and I forget to subscribe to it...
I really hate it...June 30th, 2011 at 03:29am -
I'm really intrigued by the idea of this. I like how your writing from the slaves point of view, or at least I think shes a slave unless you have some twist up your sleeve.
I did pick up a few typos but I only pointing them out because you asked for concrit but they don't interfere with the story. All in all I'm looking forward to reading more.June 28th, 2011 at 05:37pm -
This sounds interesting look forward to more.June 28th, 2011 at 01:39am
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ThanksJune 27th, 2011 at 11:51pm
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:T
update thus ^_^
it's good.June 27th, 2011 at 11:29pm
