I looooove this story! Every time I get an email this this story has been updated I get so excited but the last two times nothings changed :/ anyways, keep up the awesome work, and please keep going(: ahahaha I can't believe this has such few comments! it's ridiculous. I don't normally comment, but I just had too this time
I can't believe you only have 2 comments! well 3 now but this is such an interesting story, I've never read anything like this. It should be a book...i'm not even joking. Keep it going :D
Btw I like the new title name, it's clever