The Mob Life - Comments

can't wait for the next update

Update soon please I love this

Wow, Matt is obviously hurt. Since he's acting like a jackass.
Hopefully he'll come crawling.. not Jena. xD

This story gives me hope that there's still good ones out there, and no I'm not just saying that because I'm incredibly biased. I love you and this story is definitely one of your more brilliant ideas, and I know you have some up there, because you're amazing like that. I can't even wait to see what's going to go down when the group gets together, cause that should be interesting. I also understand where Jena might be coming from considering the fear she's had to put up with while being with Matt, however I know he's probably better than Nick if my hunch is correct. He may be a criminal but he seemed/seems to care about Jena and that should stick out to her more than anything else. You have an amazing way with words, wifey and I know I give you compliments and do things for you all the time, but there's a reason and there's more than one. I can't even begin to tell you how thankful I am that you wrote this story being the one of three so far that you have written in my honor and trust me you're getting more even if it kills me. You inspire me daily and this story is one of those things. I really hope that Jena and Matt can work things out and be happy once again, because they deserve it. I hope that Zacky and Whitney are able to help their friends bring things together and I know there wouldn't be a story without them, such supporting characters and all. The kids are adorable and I cannot wait for the rest of the story to unfold, and find out what more brilliant ideas you can put into this already amazing plot!

When Nick comes home, some shit is gonna go down.
Jena needs to confront Nick about stealing money from her, leave his ass and go back to Matt.
Jena can't be that fucking blind to what Nick is doing.

This is really super amazing.

this story=♥
I NEED MORE!

can't wait for more

I'm glad the girl stood her ground but she should have gone with Matt. After hearing that her 'boyfriend' is cheating on her and spending the money she's making on drugs and whores, I'm thinking she should have gone with Matt.

Amazing story<3 Jena needs to dump Nicks ass.

And he's back! I got so excited. Matt is probably really
hurting in the inside. And Nick just needs to find a ditch
and die before Matt tortures and kills him. Great update, Whitney!

Damn I agree with Fictional.Reality.Definitely was not expecting Matt to already come into the story this early but hey I'm not complaining!XD
I have mixed emotions about Jena's choice.On one hand I'm glad she just didn't go crawling back to Matt the second he showed up but then again he is a lot better for her than that asshole Nick.I can't fucking believe him with stealing her money that she works hard for just to get a fix and on top of that he is a cheating bastard.Maybe it is a good thing that Matt has kept tabs on Jena so at least he knows what happened and was able to tell her.Getting back to being glad that she just didn't crawl back to Matt is also that might have caused the story to end quicker.I mean come on let's be honest if she would have gone back to him that easily then she shouldn't have left in the first place or at least I don't think so.I again agree with Fictional.Reality-btw I'm not trying to steal your comments:)-that I also doubt that Matt is going to leave Jena to fend for herself.I would even bet that he said it out of anger more than anything else.Okay I'm done ranting now:p
Very intrigued to see what happens from here,hope for another update soon!:)

This is awesome! I love this story!!

Nick steals her money and she still thinks he's a good guy...umm okay. This girl is messd up.
Curious about what's gonna happen in the next one!

Oh shit!
I was not expecting him to get out so early on in the story!
and even though Matt says he is gonna let her fend for herself, i highly doubt that he really is going to do just that
<3 Michele

matt better protect her when nick comes to a raging anger. or she should turn to him he made some bad decisions but he loves her. please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon.

ok now that matt is out of jail and nick stole money for drugs and strippers you have to update the waiting will just drive me insane. please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon.

This chapter was amazing, Batman! I really liked the fact that Matt just walked into her house and told her to come home, and that he wasn't begging her or anything. I also like his bitterness too; it's very realistic, to me at least, and I really like the fact that Jena stood her ground. I can't wait to see where this goes from here!

It makes me sad and happy that she stood her ground with him. She should have gone with him xD

Loving this story!
Nick's such a tool...why would she willingly want a life with someone like him?!