Crimson - Comments

Go Damien..!

Oh boy..! Story time, story time, story time, story time, story time..!

I have my popcorn popped so commence with the story..! Pwease..? I'll bake you brownies..!

Such a douche!

I don't like the way Damien is acting but I know it's because he is hurt..I hope he gets better before the end..!

Aww their gonna spend the day together..! You know you have to update this like tomorrow right..?

You use a lot of single/improper tense. Like, "Jackson had drove them in a black range rover that she hadn't even saw before." It should've been, "Jackson had driven them in a black Range Rover that she hadn't even seen before."

I like the story, and the banner is pure awesomeness :P Damien is a pain in the ass (I'm up to Chapter 14) isn't he? The layout is cool and easy to read.

I've never come across a normal teenage girl who made candles; it's pretty interesting.

I Love your story! Can't wait for the next chapter to come out

THAT IS THE EXACT REACTION THAT ANYONE WOULD HAVE WHEN DISCOVERING THAT VAMPIRES EXIST..! I loved the way you wrote this chapter..! It could get any better..! I love how everything in this story fit perfectly together..! Purely awesome..! Thats all I gotta say..! Cannot wait for the next update..!

Another cliff hanger? Oh, come on! You're killing me! (:

Ahhh cliffhanger! So good! :)

So good! I loved it!

Don't spill the beans..! Man fine..! Can't wait forthe next update :)

The update was super good! Thanks for answering my question.

While it does have a Twilight feel to it, I find it much better than Twilight. As for bolding the title of the story, I think more people should do that. I love this story by the way, and can't wait for the next update!

Elizabeth~

P.S. You should check out some of my stories. I think you would really like at least one of them.

I'm glad he isn't gonna lie to her!! Can't wait for the update :)

Damien is someone that isn't part of Twilight. Haha! HE'S THE DIFFERENCE!

I like the chapters, though the last two were sad. D: I know how to feels to lose a grandparent. But I can't imagine how it would be if they actually took their own life. I'd be a walking dead. And Nicole isn't like Bella, so.. yeah. Bella's dumb. And Nicole actually has friends and ex boyfriends. xD And Riley is cuter than Edward.

Okay, enough of me bashing Twilight.
Loved the update!

:o
oh no!

So good! Question? Why do you bold the word crimson every time you use it?

must be horrible to walk in on something like that :/
hmm, now she's seen that his eyes have changed colour does this mean the story's starting to heat up now? (or whatever you'd call it)

I feel bad for not commenting this sooner. I've been reading it since it started. D: Well, I'll try to make it up in this comment and it'll probably be short because I'm lazy so I'm sorry. But I just have to say, Riley is adorable. I like that he cares about Nicole so much, and that he doesn't give a flying shit of what his brother has to say about the relationship. It's cute. I can imagine Cassie having loads of spunk. She seems like someone I would chill with. (: That last update was so mean, man. Killing off the grandpa! Haha I know that was a harsh way of putting it. But honestly, that was a good plot twist. Very shocking.

The only bad thing I have to say about this is that the characters remind me of Twilight so much. Hah. It's probably just me, so don't worry about it. Hah. The layout is gorgeous, by the way. :)