Lullabies - Comments

I loooove this story. Update soon please!!!!!!!!!!

Awesome story!!

So I just started reading this (all in one sitting, aha) and my god, I love it! I've recently been trying to find a good slash story and I'm so glad that I managed to stumble onto yours! :3

I mean first of- fucking love Nix. I mean, obviously he has his kinks and whatnot but he is just so freaking adorable when it comes to Naven, you can tell that he really does mean the world to him and I really do think he's a great dad. It too says a lot about him because I mean, he didn't even plan for the kid, teenage pregnancy and he hates the mother, and consisting how many dads bail out, I just really like him. It's cute how protective he is over his kid.

And on the topic of the kid- IUHSDIUGHSDIJGHSDIJGH ADORABLE. His little speech impediment and being annoying and oh my gosh I love him I just want to put him in my backpack and run away and keep him forever and ever locked up because I would be scared he would leave me.

... unless that's creepy then, um, yeah he's a cute kid. C:

BUT MY FAVOURITE IS, NO DOUBT, KILLIAN. This kid is just so fucking adorkable. Just everything he does I'm just like I WANT TO HUG YOU. He's just so awkward about everything, to the point where it's like calm your tits bro, you are cute, he will fall in love with you, do not sweat it. It makes me sad about his dad though. :c
I mean, he just tries so hard to impress and satisfy him and all he gets his a blank expression, it's just like aw, let me love you for him. The chapter when he talked to Nix though I swear to god I was squealing like YES YOU GET SOME BRO.

I like Lyssa too, she seems really nice, and Vance. They're both very good best friends and I like them and am happy with them in the story.

Who do I not like? Fucking Jacki. She needs to go. Not only is she a horrible mother, which is totally not cool I can't believe she would do that to her kid and let those people around a four year old the dumb bitch, but just a crappy person in general. I mean, only having the kid around to try and get with the dad is pathetic, and it's not like she's even doing a good job of it either which would probably make me like her more. And getting her hair done instead of being with her kid? Ugh, just do not like her. I am glad that he is done with her. She just needed to go.

ANYWAYS, as you can tell from my long-ass comment, LOVE THIS! You guys are seriously brilliant writers, I envy you, and I adore this story to bits and pieces. Now I'm done spamming your comment page and wasting your time, I shall be here patiently awaiting updates! :D

I really like this story, each person is rather realistic and has actual depth, you took the time to actually make a story and not an immediate sex scene either :)

I think I'm legitimately love with this story. It's amazing!

what a bitch! poor naven, he doesn't deserve that just because his mom is an asshat! her reaction to being scolded was priceless. Like not knowing the kid would react what way was an acceptable reason for what happened. loved the update, can't wait for the next one!!!!

Nix is pulling out allthe stops.
And normally I don't like men hitting women.
But Jacki totally deserved it.
I hope the little one is okay.

I effing love this story. You two are great writers.

Poor little kid! :(
I don't like Jacki. At all. >.<
Vance is cool though. I like him a lot. He's a good uncle.

I just love Killian! <3 He's so cute.
Aww, he finally worked up the courage to apologize.
Update soon please! :D

Ahh now I am happy for him.
It's was a good weekend for Killian.

I love Killian....he's adorable.

Nix is amazingggg<3

Update soon?

killian is so cute omg

I think it would be funny if Naven like, ran into him..
Or tripped and fell next to him so Nix could see
Killian's reaction...

lol. That was lame. I'm really re-thinking if I should delete
that or not...
x]

Yay he apologized;) awesome chapter!

Adorable:)

Thatta boy!

Awwwww I love this!

Aw I love how he called him his baby. i don't know why but it was so adorable. Like everything he said about him :P

Anyway, update <3

Awww that was such a cute and adorable chapter.
<3
And yes I could see the picture and I don't have one.