Ice Cream - Comments

Cool! Very neat and awesome, as well as very well-written, too. :)
Keep up your super-neat, very phenomenal and brilliant writing! :)

Gah! Sick Grandpa!!!!... This gave me the giggly wigglies. Or the heebie jeebies, if you will. Gosh golly gee was this... Eugh! In a good way. It was great that you could put yourself in that mindset to write something so... Delightfully sickening! It's like a car crash where you know people are dying and it's horrible, but so real and... Well, it's impossible to look away. I loved the ending of it though, because if it were left alone without the rest of the piece it would be perfectly innocent. However... I get the strangest feeling that they didn't just go for ice cream... Ack! It's horrible! Good job!

By the by, your signature is awesome. Gotta love Rob Zombie. :3

thanks to both of you <3 :) I haven't finished with it yet... am actually spacing the paragraphs out just now. It's just a quick one shot for a contest so I'm trying to sort the layout and stuff. Thank you both so much :)

Awesome story

I'm subbing.

This story is awesome, honestly. However, before someone comes along and reports you for it, you'd probably need to paragraph and space out your first chapter and the rest of your chapters before you continue. I've been reported for something similar.

Nice first chap dude!! Made me feel all sick and freaked out and sorts, which most stories don't usually do. You capture the perp's mind perfectly!