The Doctor and the Misfit - Comments

Hello again thought I would comment. This time I'm busting my reviewing skills out. Okay first thing that has been really bugging me is that the Doctor does not seem very 11th Doctor ish. I mean why hasn't he tried to defend that "bowties are cool" (he said strainedly), his use of geronimo, and the fact that he would not fo to bora bora cause of the lack of technology. Just some small things to point out. Paying attention to details is what makes things count.

Its still interesting though one other thing, a white sundress and converse sneakers? Something doesn't add up, but maybe I'm out of the loop.

Anyway like I said keep writing and I will continue on.

And ues I'm a whovian. I also have a cowrite with another author in which we are doing a tenth doctor and brian haner love triangle (mainly to try and spread other types of fanfic out but don't tell anyone)

Oh thank you so much for the comment.
And yeah I get what you mean by chapter two. I do that all the time, I always have a paragraph that hurries and transitions to the next day because I am really bad at writing something to make the time pass. Sorry about that.
Your a Whovian too? That's so great, I will defiantly check your story out.

I like this, it is very well written, however I do need to say that chapter 2 was a tad bit confusing, it was like she went from the doctor to community service with no break in between,, and I thought she was still at the store. Maybe I misread something. But I was glad to find another Doctor Who fanfic out there as they are not that common. sorry but small personal shout out, please check out my doctor who fan fic called I'm Coming Home to You. Anyway please continue writing this.

Aww thank you!

I've just discovered this story and I really love it!
It's such a clever idea. :)

Haha, yup mine was confused on what the show was about, but her mom watches it so she can't complain.

I think it never does and never will.
But anyways my cousin probably wouldn't of, because my cousins have no idea what Doctor Who is. And if they ever watch it, they will just laugh in my face.

Being sick is never fun! Yeah, when I turned 16 I didn't feel ANY different haha
Lol, I throw my pillow at her and she changed it back for a little bit.

It was fun, even though I was sick. But it doesn't feel any different being 18 now...
And I would of slapped my cousin. Haha!

Your welcome, so how was your birthday?
" What about Nathan? " That is a GOOOD question haha
I was watching Doctor Who a few nights ago :D My cousin changed the channel on me though -___-

I'm probably going to have to read everything over a billion times to decide.
But thank you, it means a lot.

Haha I don't blame you
I'm sorry you're sick ): and Happy birthday! incase I can't tell you tomorrow.

I like both. I can't decide.
It will be a struggle when I get to that point when I need to make her decide.

And he did! :D
...Now I kinda want her to be with the Doctor
But I like both, but to me the Doctor seems more sweet to her.

The Doctor needs to get in there!

Hahaha, its alright!
Yeah, I was like Nathan has his way with the ladies
And that better me the Doctor touching her and not some creep!

Wow I like how I said the Doctor.
I meant Nathan. I keep getting them mixed up for some reason.

Haha!
I really wanted to show that part of the Doctor.
Because he has had sex, but we never see it on Doctor Who for some reason.

OH MY GOSH!!!! hahaha
I was like hushshududs! They slept together!

Yeah. He does not like Nathan, especially that he has to watch them together.