That was the most original story I have read! I know it was written ages ago and you might not even see this comment but I still want to let you know how amazing this is. Although it's very cryptic I think you give a reader just enough information for them to create their own ideas to fill in the blanks, as it were. I think the ending in particular is very well written.
To sum up, this is a beautifully written, incredibly original story and I wish there were more like this on Mibba.
That was the most original story I have read! I know it was written ages ago and you might not even see this comment but I still want to let you know how amazing this is. Although it's very cryptic I think you give a reader just enough information for them to create their own ideas to fill in the blanks, as it were. I think the ending in particular is very well written.
To sum up, this is a beautifully written, incredibly original story and I wish there were more like this on Mibba.
Jen xx