Griffin. - Comments

girl meets girl (100)

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This was simply amazing. I mean, wow.
It was so sad! I loved how he saved her
and ended up dying for her, that was really
sweet and romantic! <3

August 25th, 2011 at 11:08pm

bryan_englander (100)

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simply amazing, thats all i can say, so much emotion, just simply amazing.

August 22nd, 2011 at 07:05am

Forgettingjuliet (100)

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If you were to make this into a long story it would be amazing. it has so much potential and you have amazing potential as a writer goo luck on your journey. I really hope you make this into a longer story

June 29th, 2011 at 03:50am

sofx. (100)

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If this was a chapter by chapter story I would so subscribe to this. The very first line is catching, and the ending is priceless. You've got a lot of potential. And I love it. The words were strong, filled with emotion and almost the very experience. I felt present the whole time I was reading. Keep this up. That takes some hardcore skill. Good job.

June 28th, 2011 at 09:03pm