Update plzzzz .
March 16th, 2013 at 11:46pm
Trust Me - Comments
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WHen you update? X(February 12th, 2013 at 02:53am
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You havent updated in forever, are you going to?July 25th, 2012 at 06:46am
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You havent updated in forever, are you going to?July 25th, 2012 at 06:46am
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Oh, I really hope they can save that house! Also, Kaine's words were very strange. *gasp* Oh, I see something awesome coming in the future that my slow mind has not yet seen!
Also, I'm very sorry but I feel the need to point this out. Your grammar and spelling is off in the last few chapters. It's nothing big, just a some little things.
Also, you misused the word bear in the last chapter. In that manner of speaking it would be spelled 'bear'. To not bear something is not to tolerate it and to not bare something is to not reveal something.March 19th, 2012 at 04:02pm -
I just finished reading this and its prequel.
I am intrigued.December 26th, 2011 at 07:42am -
eep! well now this is interesting isn't it? yes because enemies always fall madly in love lol
what?? i can't wait till tuesday! lol jk
this was a great chapter! i'm so glad ayden is ok and that little delve into the past was a good touchAugust 12th, 2011 at 05:14pm -
Hmmm, really interesting stuff here.August 12th, 2011 at 07:25am
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well.....this is a bit of a pickle here.....hmmm ok wait i'm confused. have they already switched their bodies back or are they still in each others bodies? ok and next i have no freakin clue sorry :( but that is a good question.....well maybe because they haven't figured out the rest of their puzzle yet. he still has to fix his halo so they need to find a way to get it fully fixed and then the sisters fixed (whose name i have forgotten temporarily because my brain decided to shut off) and then everyone can be happy..........and now you're making me want biscuits :pAugust 9th, 2011 at 07:56am
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O.O............ :'(
*sniffs* whats gonna happen to them? you can't kill them! not after all this time! if you do then you have to magically bring them back to life!
it probably didn't help that i was listening to The Ghost of You while reading this chapterAugust 8th, 2011 at 05:27am -
>.> nothing new.. MUST KNOW!August 8th, 2011 at 04:18am
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O.O Angels raining from the sky? SO MUCH INTEREST!July 26th, 2011 at 08:56am
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*covers eyes with hands and cowers under the covers* i do not see this ending wellJuly 22nd, 2011 at 06:07pm
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O.o expose in what way though is important to know..July 19th, 2011 at 10:45am
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Super amazing!
:D
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O.O wait whats the news?!July 18th, 2011 at 09:55pm
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lol hes copying his dad :))))
i think you shud do both kinds of slash but if your really looking 4 drama then you could make her kinda gay. like she may possibly be but she won't come out
and great chapter! always have to say that cuz its true! :DJuly 12th, 2011 at 02:50am -
I'll co-write with you, if you want that is. :)July 12th, 2011 at 12:40am
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YAY ELLA ND LAIN IS OKAY!!!!
GOOOO ELLA FIND UR LOVE <3
:) cute chaptrJuly 9th, 2011 at 07:44am -
OH MUH GURSH I CNT BELIEVE YOU MENTIONED ME!!!!!!!!!!!
sadly, and i say sadly because im so awsome, nobody has done tht before lol jkjk thnks so much i feel so loved tho
and uhm neither uv thm is allowed to die or I will sneak into ur house @ night nd steal ur cookies thn send a army uv gummy bears lmao
P.S.-thnks again nd i LOVE UR STRYJuly 9th, 2011 at 07:37am
