Hold My Heart Captive - Comments

Wow! i just finished reading the story and it was AMAZING!.
when i first saw the story i was like i don't know if i will like it but i saw how high it was rated and all the comments about it so i decided i am going to read it.and i am so glad i did!
you are an amazing writer:)

Love this oh by the way with the cops using Police brutality they are breaking police protocol and the law of police. even if they have the ok plus it is breaking A persons fifth and fourteenth amendment of the united states Constitution Regarding cruelty And protection of the law! Also the police can get sued by the guys for misconduct Plus in a court of law if they do see that the police did use misconduct the law can find them in contempt of the court! Plus the guys would get a lawyer or phone call to one if not they would have a right to file a complaint or they can call there local ACLU If there rights are violated! Loved this ok I'm done sorry lol just wanted u to know those facts

Absolutly the best story EVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Alright, so I thought that this story was really good. However, I was confused about the custody issues involved. I know for a fact that once a child in foster care turns 18 he or she is free to leave. That child is no longer a ward of the state. I'm. Not trying to sound hostile or bitchy, I'm just trying to understand here. Considering eighteen is the legal adult age all throughout the US. To me it made no sense since she was 19. If anything she could have just left that situation. As such, you are the author, but I just wanted to express what I thought. Everything else was good though. That was the only real confusing thing for me. I'll be reading the sequel soon.

omg i cant believe tat after all this time its over :(...i read this and looked forward too it sooo many nights and tonight my heart was like constantly going and i couldnt keep a smile off my face :) thank u lord tat theres a sequel cause im not ready to give this up yet :) :)

Aww, a happy ending. This story is amazing, Now I'm off to read the sequal :)

awwww. <3 an amazing and tearful ending to an amazing story. so freaking happy that there's a sequel. (:

Awwwwwwwwww! Awesome ending! :D

For sure, one of the best stories I've ever read! :)
Brilliant ending.
Can't wait to read the sequel now :D
<3

loved this story so much!! definitely one of my favorite ones ='D now I'm excited for the sequel hihihi

aawe :) awesome ending to this part of the story :) now i'm heading over to the other ''part'' of the story cos i can't wait to see what's going to happen now that the guys are back out and they're all together again <3 loved every chapter of this story :)

I hadmy heart held captive by this story. Wonderful ending absolutely beautiful.

I want to be informed! :D You write really well, I love it! Can't wait for the sequel :)

oh oh pick me pick me damnit *jumps up and down* your story is one of the two i read on here i defininatly want to be informed cause this one rocks like Avenged Sevenfold :)

Dude.. I am Totally lovin this story, so good!!

This story is amazing. Tell me if you do anymore....pleaseee?

Omgsh I can't get enough of this story! It's so freaking amazing, your so bloody talented !

FADLFKJADSL;GKJJA;LFDSJ WHEN YOU MAKE A JIMMY STORY I WANNA BE IN IT. LET ME BE IN IT. PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEASE.

I would LOVE to be informed if u write any more avenged sevenfold fan fics..... u are a great writer. And btw this story is epic so.... more updates please!!

Please Update I am addicted to this story!