This is a great story ! Haha, both me AND you are writing Jacob Storys ! How fun ! Anyways, I like the story line. I've only read the first chapter so far. Dont worry, I'll be reading the rest soon :D
This story does NOT suck, it's quite cute. Typical teenage story. I like it so far. Just a little tip, you might want to proof read it here and there. And you might not want to keep using & instead of and. Mibba, in my opinion, is pretty strict and when you post a story you kind of have to be a little more serious like in a real book.
Anyway, I like it ! Just keep doing what you're doing ! :))
This is a great story ! Haha, both me AND you are writing Jacob Storys ! How fun ! Anyways, I like the story line. I've only read the first chapter so far. Dont worry, I'll be reading the rest soon :D
This story does NOT suck, it's quite cute. Typical teenage story. I like it so far. Just a little tip, you might want to proof read it here and there. And you might not want to keep using & instead of and. Mibba, in my opinion, is pretty strict and when you post a story you kind of have to be a little more serious like in a real book.
Anyway, I like it ! Just keep doing what you're doing ! :))
I enjoyed the suspense trailed from the beginning. But I was a bit puzzled with Tiffany using the f word cause it kind of distorted my perception. Can't wait to read the rest, though. Good work.
Yay first to comment. I'm like always exicted when I'm first to comment anyways I really like the story it doesn't suck ahaha hope u can update soon and I bet Jacobs gonna hate Tiffany because ya know Bella thing but I hope he doesn't :) lol
June 29th, 2011 at 02:45am
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