Loving You Is Just So Hard to Do - Comments

  • shadow123

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    wow how can someone not believe their daughter :o update :)
    July 25th, 2011 at 02:18pm
  • shadow123

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    love it!!! update plz :) awesome story :)
    July 19th, 2011 at 01:09pm
  • shakabunny

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    This is a great story ! Haha, both me AND you are writing Jacob Storys ! How fun ! Anyways, I like the story line. I've only read the first chapter so far. Dont worry, I'll be reading the rest soon :D

    This story does NOT suck, it's quite cute. Typical teenage story. I like it so far. Just a little tip, you might want to proof read it here and there. And you might not want to keep using & instead of and. Mibba, in my opinion, is pretty strict and when you post a story you kind of have to be a little more serious like in a real book.

    Anyway, I like it ! Just keep doing what you're doing ! :))

    ~Samm
    July 14th, 2011 at 10:14pm
  • shakabunny

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    This is a great story ! Haha, both me AND you are writing Jacob Storys ! How fun ! Anyways, I like the story line. I've only read the first chapter so far. Dont worry, I'll be reading the rest soon :D

    This story does NOT suck, it's quite cute. Typical teenage story. I like it so far. Just a little tip, you might want to proof read it here and there. And you might not want to keep using & instead of and. Mibba, in my opinion, is pretty strict and when you post a story you kind of have to be a little more serious like in a real book.

    Anyway, I like it ! Just keep doing what you're doing ! :))

    ~Samm
    July 14th, 2011 at 10:14pm
  • Cherrycoke12

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    Hehe some action ;) love it!! More please ? Grate update :) x
    July 9th, 2011 at 10:05am
  • Cherrycoke12

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    Can I have more updates please so we can see if anything happens between Bella and Tiff. Good update :) x
    July 8th, 2011 at 11:42pm
  • shadow123

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    love this story :)
    July 5th, 2011 at 01:39pm
  • Joseyphina

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    I enjoyed the suspense trailed from the beginning. But I was a bit puzzled with Tiffany using the f word cause it kind of distorted my perception. Can't wait to read the rest, though. Good work.
    July 5th, 2011 at 03:17am
  • CaliforniaShadows

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    Yay first to comment. I'm like always exicted when I'm first to comment anyways I really like the story it doesn't suck ahaha hope u can update soon and I bet Jacobs gonna hate Tiffany because ya know Bella thing but I hope he doesn't :) lol
    June 29th, 2011 at 02:45am