So how well acquainted are you with NZ, because you're painting a very nice picture. And yes it does have all those awesome things you have listed, but they don't really work in synchronicity.
I'm sorry I have to say this... WOOH NEW ZEALAND! (its what we do whenever our country in mentioned in anything, because we're not mentioned often) Anyway this story looks interesting, so I'll get to that.
Whatta cliffhanger, please update! A few things: so if this story is like the movie then Logan and Patrick won't end up together after 500 days? And are you still planning on doing the sequel/companion story of Jonathan and Kaylee? That would be amazing!!
VEGAS BABY! I can't wait till I'm old enough to go there :p It's funny how Kaylee is acting crazy and Logan is keeping it low-key. So ready to hear about her past :)