Ur story is absoutely beautiful and i enjoyed reading it. I love how u did character emotions and characteristics are great. The chemistry between them is strong. Its greatly neat and written. Its become one of my favorites. Can u update before i cry lol :D update
I must say, a Michael Jackson story is quite impressive. I haven't seen him posted about a lot, which surprises me. But I'm glad that you posted one. This is a good way to rememeber him. I like your character's story too, how she started with Michael at 13. That's a relatively young age, but than again, it is MJ we are talking about. He wanted the best and that's what he got. I never will forget him, even though he had some bad years. So I guess thanks for posting the story that is keeping him alive in spirit. I can just imagine how hard it is to write something like this knowing about MJ. So I hope you keep up the great work!
August 5th, 2011 at 05:42pm
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your welcome :)