Don't Stop Now. - Comments

lovelyhope (100)

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This was so cute. I loved how John got jealous when Cody said she was going to go guy hunting. I also loved how you kept mentioning "love is patient." It worked well with the story, and fit really well with your idiom too :)

July 12th, 2011 at 10:26pm

la dispute. (100)

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This was adorable! I felt so bad for her when she thought that John was in love with another girl, because really, that would just be heart breaking! Lol. But I loved how you made them perfect in the end, and tied in the idiom so good! :)

July 12th, 2011 at 04:23am

disappearing act. (100)

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Yay! A list of things I loved: 1. John O'Callaghan.. enough said. 2. the idiom being tied in with the love-- so cute. 3. It was a love story! I'm a sucker for a love story.

Really great job (:

July 1st, 2011 at 06:49am