Only read the first chapter so far, and I love it. However. I'm from New Hampshire and have been to Bar Harbor and have noticed a few problems. So, yeah, I'm going to be that person. And I apologize already. But. Capital of Maine is Augusta. And from the Lakes Region in NH to Portsmouth it's about an hour or so. And then it's another four or five hours of driving to get to Bar Harbor. But. I'm now done being a pain in the ass. And I'm now going to go back to reading. All of your descriptions of Bar Harbor so far are dead on, though. I love it there and am glad that I can go back in your story if not in real life. Okay. Now I'm done.
I absolutely ADORE this story :) I like how ur portraying Brian so far. His and Fae's relationship is very interesting so far, I can almost feel their chemistry. Please update soon! <3
I like how you started it. Making the character have some things that she has to run away from. Also how both Brian and Fae meet. It was different but very good. I hope to read more of the story later on. You are doing a great job!