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  • lyrainthedark

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    Why? I like the story and if you didn't think you could handle a child you shouldn't of opened your legs so to speak. Raise the child please, i like the story:D
    October 17th, 2012 at 07:33am
  • Ravenclaw_Cutie

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    @teenagedream91 thanks for the advice(: Its appreciated. But I have abandoned the story.
    March 5th, 2012 at 08:31pm
  • teenagedream91

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    It was good the two chapters but for me it seemed a little too fast paced and didn't really give a lot of background to who the character really is. All we know is that she is Christina's cousin and that's it, to really get the readers to grasp this story is to let them know how this girl is a little bit more before you just throw her into competition like that. I recently got into The Voice and they do a little segment of each singer and they tell a little bit about themselves and you didn't have to do it like that but make her a little known to the readers before jumping in. Maybe it sounded so fast to me is because the chapters are pretty short XD
    March 5th, 2012 at 12:10am
  • TheWh0rr0r

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    OMG! I love the show and I love this story! PLZZ CONTINUE!!!

    (Adam is my fave coach)
    August 1st, 2011 at 03:59am
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