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  • LongLive;;

    LongLive;; (100)

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    That was heartbreaking.!

    The layout was nice, a little hard to read, but not a big deal.

    There were a few places where the sentences were run-ons or fragments, but not a whole lot.

    I loved the emotion you conveyed and how you didn't cop out and go for the happy ending. I applaud you for that. This made me feel what she was feeling, and it was really great.

    Wonderful job(:
    July 1st, 2011 at 07:17pm
  • Legendary.

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    Thanks I really appreciate it.
    July 1st, 2011 at 03:12pm
  • LAMBinLOVE

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    That was pretty amazing! *claps* And yes, I literally clapped if you're wondering^^
    July 1st, 2011 at 04:47am
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