The layout was nice, a little hard to read, but not a big deal.
There were a few places where the sentences were run-ons or fragments, but not a whole lot.
I loved the emotion you conveyed and how you didn't cop out and go for the happy ending. I applaud you for that. This made me feel what she was feeling, and it was really great.
The layout was nice, a little hard to read, but not a big deal.
There were a few places where the sentences were run-ons or fragments, but not a whole lot.
I loved the emotion you conveyed and how you didn't cop out and go for the happy ending. I applaud you for that. This made me feel what she was feeling, and it was really great.
Wonderful job(: