July 2nd, 2011 at 05:42pm
Very fascinating..... I’m intrigued to know more... but wait.. is this just a completed one shot?
Very descriptive and your one heck on an awesome writer!
I Need Somebody To Love Me - Comments
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July 2nd, 2011 at 04:44pm
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Very fascinating..... I’m intrigued to know more... but wait.. is this just a completed one shot?
Very descriptive and your one heck on an awesome writer!July 2nd, 2011 at 04:43pm -
@iLov3Yuhh!! Thanks for reading & commenting! Ikr TWLOHA is my savior <3 I've been looking everywhere for a TWLOHA bracelet and idk where to get one.
@ A Dreamer's Fame thanks! I just dont see it into a chaptered book, though. Anyway, thanks for reading & commenting! I really appreciate it.July 2nd, 2011 at 12:56am -
@crazylover101 Oh, okay.. Yeah, i have a friend whos like that too. Thanks for commenting & reading
@DevastatedDreamer Thanks sooo much for the comment and advice and compliments! And yeah, ikr, im like that too. And about the line, the first two lines are part of a Jonas Brothers song called "When You Look Me In The Eyes" (even though i dont like them i thought those lines fit perfectly) and the "I need somebody to love me" i added in myself :) Thanks again! I can totally relate.July 2nd, 2011 at 12:54am -
Such an amazing short story. I think that if you made this into a chaptered book, then it’d be a hit. But, anyway, I lurve it.July 1st, 2011 at 03:55am
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Wow, that was awesome dudette & so very sad.
I love TWLOHA, they are so awesome.
As way ur story. :)July 1st, 2011 at 01:41am -
wow.
That is very deep, my dear.
The descriptions and the emotions are quite fantastic.
You are a truly gifted writer.
It was a truly deep and touching story, that shows the pain a lot of people deal with on a daily basis.
It accurately described the way many girls, especially teenagers, feel about love and the way the take their pain out on themselves, as with the razor blade.
I particularly like this line: "If the heart is always searching, can it ever find a home? I've been looking for that someone, I'll never make it on my own. I need somebody to love me." I don't know if you wrote it yourself, or you found it somewhere, but it is insanely deep and fits the emotion of the story perfectly.
Good job. =)
All-in-all it was quite wonderful.June 30th, 2011 at 11:24pm -
love it.. ir really get 2 my heart.. that happend 2 a friend of mine.. it was pretty sad seeing a friend like that..June 30th, 2011 at 10:35pm
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I took/edited the pic for this story (cover and in layout) myself ;)June 30th, 2011 at 10:16pm
& reading!