I love this story! I hope you update soon... (ok, now for the constructive criticism)
I really like this plot, since it's unique, and I love the character's personality and it's not too predictable (which is good: predictable isn't always that good, just stay somewhere on track). And this plot isn't Mary Sue (good thing), where everyone lives happily ever after from the start. Good job!
I'm the first to comment on this story!!
November 8th, 2011 at 11:08pm
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I really like this plot, since it's unique, and I love the character's personality and it's not too predictable (which is good: predictable isn't always that good, just stay somewhere on track). And this plot isn't Mary Sue (good thing), where everyone lives happily ever after from the start. Good job!
I'm the first to comment on this story!!