I have no idea why you were so unsure about this one-shot. This was absolutely amazing. For being written in less than 24 hrs. it was good. I enjoyed it. You surprised me when you wrote it in past tense instead of your usual present tense, but I liked it. I really, truly, honestly did. The ending was amazing. I think you need to give yourself more credit when it comes to writing. Just saying...lol. You'll get a message or comment once judging is over if you place.