I like this but I'm warning you...there is another story-or series actually- on mibba written by Pensrock where a girl, who grew up with the boys, dates one Staal and then goes to another. I was reading another Staal story where it happened to have SLIGHT similarity to Pensrock's story and they both got flagged for plagiarism (though not by each other). This could potentially happen to you, so I'm warning you early! lol Be careful, but keep writing!