Oh my god! I must say I'm greatfully surprised. I'm not very fond of the pairing, but the way you developed everything actually made me love this. You should write a full story, if you still want to. ;)
Wow! Yeah this was probably the only one-shot Brallon fic I have read so far were something happens! Yeah this was really good. I mean it's like wrong in ways but I really just love this. <3