Cuddles - Comments

The layout was cute and matched the cuteness of this story. I think you could've made it a little bigger (or readable), but it was good. I liked how much imagery you used---I could picture "her" very well, as well as the emotions that the MC was feeling towards her. I could really feel his love for her. Really good job. (:

C: I really like this. So cute. I love the layout, too. It's a little small, but I think that actually adds to the cuteness!

Oh my god Rowen, are you attempting to kill me even though you had no idea I was going to read this? Likely story, bro. Anyway, the cuteness of this nearly caused me to die because I can't handle thst much cuteness at once. I mean, there were even raccoons. Bitches love raccoons. But just, my heart went into overload & sputtered a little from disuse. I could totally feel the passion & snuggliness of the characters which makes me wish I had a cat in here to be snuggly with. You're imspiring me to love the cats even more, son. I just, I've never read something short & adorable before. Ugh, so great. Come to my room now, please.

This has got to be one of the cutest, most adorable, heart touching things I have read in quite a while. I could see the two of them, feel the closeness, their body heat; it really pulled me into the moment. You did a fantastic job portraying the love between the two. It didn't feel forced like a lot of new book couples do- it felt completely natural, and very... real. The one and only thing I found wrong with this piece was -I'm pretty sure- a minuscule typo hardly worth mentioning: "You wrinkle your tiny nose when I press my lips against him." Should 'him' be 'them'? Anyway, outstanding job, dear. Keep on pennin'! I'll likely be checking out more of your works in the near future.

This is really, really cute. <3 Like, I was mentally going "awe" the whole time I was reading it, aha. You really did an amazing job at depicting this moment, and the obviously lovely feelings between the two. It was inanley adorable and like, Chachi I was smiling at the end, hehe :).<3

The only suggestion I would have is to perhaps use a different word besides small? Tiny, little, etc. The word small wasn't mentioned but twice I believe but due to the size of this piece it got a little repeatitve. x: <3 Just a suggestion. :)

Anyways, you did a really, really great job on this. :)

Aw, this is adorable! I could really feel the love between the two characters! While I was reading this, I swear it brought a smile on my face. :) Just...so cute!

I also really like the layout. It goes well with the story! :)