Wow, so I just found this story and read this and the prequel all in one day. I know it has been a few months but do you think you could finish this? I really like this story and want to see how you end it. Who is he talking about? who might hurt her?
I noticed that the final battle scene in the sequel corresponded to the movie, whereas the prequel did not. You may want to fix that. I hope Draco has a very good excuse for being gone for so long- WTF!? I think the story is going well, but Harry needs more personality and hopefully...well hopefully, he won't be heartbroken when all is said and done. I think Locklynn should have closure- with Snape. Visit his grave or read a last letter. OH! That would be perfect! Maybe Snape could have left her a letter and a gift, or some such. <3333