I love the update ! I don't know if I mentioned , but the layout is really cute ! Anyways , you're doing really good . I agree with Odette; up there . But , I really like it. Update soon , love<3
I love the storyline. It's interesting plot that could come together great. But there were various punctuation and sentence errors. Also, the sentences sounded childish. Maybe you should try more vocabulary range?
Great story! It was leaving me wanting more. But I do think that you should have longer chapters. (it's just a suggestion) but please update soon I will be subscribing! I cant wait to see what you write next!(:
Hey ! This is really good , I really like it and it's beyond creative . To be honest I can't wait for more , so please update soon ! Keep up the amazing work and I'm so subscribing . (:
can't wait for more, update soon!