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  • alyssa-anne

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    Oh my god, Bristol is stoned! Hahah I loved this chapter. It was so cute. From Kaner dropping off Sean, to the moments with Dan and Bristol, and then the end! I have a feeling Dan is not going to be too happy when he gets home to discover his fiance has had like, three pot brownies! Glad the meeting with his family when perfect! Can't wait for more. <3
    July 19th, 2011 at 06:50am
  • RosiePosie08

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    Smooth move sean.
    July 18th, 2011 at 02:38pm
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    heheh stones Bristol.
    I still am and always will be team Danny though.....
    July 18th, 2011 at 11:23am
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    stoned bristol. mwhahahahahha. dan is gonna be pissed.so happy.
    July 18th, 2011 at 07:09am
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    I like the idea of them eloping. Much better than a big wedding.

    Oh no! special brownies! that should be good.

    love, love, love this!
    July 18th, 2011 at 07:05am
  • RosiePosie08

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    Love this.
    July 16th, 2011 at 07:20am
  • Rylie_

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    God I love this story. I just caught up all three stories and I must say..I'm team Carbomb all the way. They seem perfect together. I loved how she acted with his family.

    Can't wait for more :)
    July 15th, 2011 at 10:38pm
  • Marinesister92

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    I still love you and your writing but hate Carbomb and her together. I want Danny. And i'll continue to stay team Danny until it becomes her and Dany.
    July 14th, 2011 at 01:52am
  • reneeanne

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    They're so cute. I love how she is with his family. I can't wait for the wedding!
    July 13th, 2011 at 09:38pm
  • alyssa-anne

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    Yeah, my blackberry sucks sometimes! ^^ my bad, hahaha.
    July 13th, 2011 at 08:56pm
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    Yes, yes, yes for eloping!! That's thw way to go. I think it's more romantic too, besides being less stressful! I think Bristol and Dan would be the kind of couple to do it, too! Loving these sweet chapters with his family! Can't wait for the next one! (:
    July 13th, 2011 at 08:54pm
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    Yes, yes, yes for eloping!! That's thw way to go. I think it's more romantic too, besides being less stressful! I think Bristol and Dan would be the kind of couple to do it, too! Loving these sweet chapters with his family! Can't wait for the next one! (:
    July 13th, 2011 at 08:53pm
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    Yes, yes, yes for eloping!! That's thw way to go. I think it's more romantic too, besides being less stressful! I think Bristol and Dan would be the kind of couple to do it, too! Loving these sweet chapters with his family! Can't wait for the next one! (:
    July 13th, 2011 at 08:51pm
  • alyssa-anne

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    Those exhibitionists!! The bit with the niece had me swooning! Dan is actually so damn cute with kids. I love that she was accepted so easily by his family! is mom seems like such a sweetheart. And the first part of the chapter.... I loved Bristol's lunch date with Jonny and PKane. Kaner's such a little shit. I hope he doesn't cause problems! Update soon?
    July 12th, 2011 at 04:39am
  • catbat

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    Oh I hope Dan doesn't muck it up again!
    July 11th, 2011 at 07:38pm
  • Marinesister92

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    I'm looking forward to this. I'm really hopping Danny becomes Super Danny again.
    This whole thing should be interesting. Can't wait to see where it goes.
    Sarah
    July 11th, 2011 at 06:58pm
  • billet-doux

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    I'm so glad you're writing this. I love all the Chicago specialties you're including. I live about forty minutes from the city and never have time for anything anymore -- this story is already bringing back memories. Three cheers for Carcillo in red!
    July 11th, 2011 at 02:46am
  • alyssa-anne

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    I loved the bit about her finally feeling completely happy! I love that Dan noticed that. I know the wedding planning is going to be fun, albeit a bit stressful, but I know you'll write it well! I can't wait to see the interaction between the boys of the Blackhawks and Bristol and Dan! (:
    July 10th, 2011 at 09:11pm
  • sybilla1984

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    Yay, sequel!!
    July 10th, 2011 at 12:47pm
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