I like this it intrigues me I want to know more about Sam and T or C. I like the descriptions of the desert surrounding her. Also the way you compare it to other places while giving the reader slight view into Beatrice's past. I like how Beatrice is a city girl so am I so I can relate. All around it's cool little story the only criticism is there was a small mistake when she was talking about being hot (loved that by the way) you she slowed melting instead of slowly melting otherwise I like it.
August 18th, 2011 at 07:57pm