Vindictive - Comments

I loved it. c: And I can't help but notice your icon of the boys kissing.. x'D I sat there and I laughed because that's Drew and Jack.

I like this story. The ending was surprising but it was just.. great.

I loved this story so so much.

I just also wanted to point out that you reference 'LCD' a lot in chapter 6...
Are you thinking of acid, as in LSD?

D: I feel like an idiot because I didn't get this story at all, can you explain it to me? :C

Excited to read :) just like to point out the the lyrics on the summary were originally by Nine Inch Nails- Johnny Cash did the cover of the song, Hurt. :D

also still loving it

I always love reading this story and I'm happy when I see that this is updated. I love your work and I can't wait for more :)

hmm... i guess i'd tip on Ryland...

interesting ! i'm liking this.
dark and deep
plus awesome idea with the chapter titles

I am absolutely in love with this story. I agree with BrightBlue; you're writing is amazing. I know I'm oozing with compliments, but I can't help it. I was drawn in instantly, and when I hit the last chapter I was horrified that it had to stop! Please, update soon, because you've got such great talent :) Totally subscribing.

P.S. The boys you picked are gorgeous :P

I love it, the imagery you create is something that many writers on here seem to be lacking. Keep going, I can't wait to read more

Why did you change the point of veiw?
I enjoyed it just confused on the why

woahh :) I love the pictures :)

Good page too

I like it. It's very different, which is good!

Loving it.
You have a unique writing style(:

Keep going, love. <3