Wow. You know, I don't think I've ever come across a more creative writer in all the years I've been cruising fan fiction. You never cease to amaze me.
This was fabulous. I've been a fan of "The Devil Went Down To Georgia" since... Like, forever, and seeing it spun for my favorite guitarist? Just WOW. Excellent story.
The concept was really quirky and imaginative even a bit risky, but you really pulled it off. I like how you didn't over explain anything or provide much backstory. It really worked.
He began a new series of rapid notes running up the neck of the guitar and gradually worked his way backwards, going across every string and fret in the process.
I love this passage. It gives the reader a really detailed sense of what's going on. It almost made me feel like I was playing the guitar myself.
Overall, it was really funny and quite well-written.
This was fabulous. I've been a fan of "The Devil Went Down To Georgia" since... Like, forever, and seeing it spun for my favorite guitarist? Just WOW. Excellent story.