Looks really good and funny so far. Can't wait for more of it and to see ify suspicions about why Frankie was on the floor is right along with what Gee will do about it.
You probably think i'm a creeper because I read all your stories and all but it's just because I love them so much, and yeah. I love this one as well, waiting for an update !
okay, first of all, i love the layout, it's amazingly cool. i think this story has real potential to be really awesome, and i'm really looking forward to seeing what happens! oh, and also find out where the title came from. :3
I really like this story so far! At first I was a tad confused about the jump from chapter 1 to chapter 2, but then after awhile I sorta got it:) Your use of description is brilliant! Keep it up and post soon!:)