Numb. - Comments

Wow. This is captivating and creepy at the same time. But it makes me think, and worry, and realize that I've been nodding along with most of what is said this whole read. It's a little freaky how I can agree with 90% of this. But isn't that was art is supposed to do? Touch on the reader's inner sanctum and disturb the comfortable or something like that?

Besides all that, it was written well.

I like the layout. It's dark and simple and the picture seems to fit the theme.

People think you’re crazy, and the truth it, they’re not completely wrong. it should be is.

Convince then the world you’re living in is better than anything they’d ever get out of real life. then should be them.

I really like the way you used second person. It's hard to find stories like this on Mibba, and harder to find it well done. I could seriously feel the emotion here, and the way the story wonderfully flowed added on to that. I also like the last line, with the n in parentheses. Well done.

I can totally see myself becoming this one day. I have read this over and over and it never ceases to amaze me.

The wording and the flow of the whole piece is amazing and put together quite well!

I'm not sure if you'd be offended if I said this is really interesting.
I read up on a lot of things as such, including folie a deaux in hopes of psychiatry being in my future career.
I love the words that you've used and how they blend <3