Let's Get Lost. - Comments

  • Party City Spook

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    This reminds me of my childhood.
    December 28th, 2011 at 11:09am
  • Party City Spook

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    Yo dawg, this story was off the chizzay. Then the dumb author stopped writing.
    December 27th, 2011 at 09:29am
  • Bex94

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    Yeah she should call off the wedding and get back with Ben. Now.
    September 19th, 2011 at 03:28pm
  • Party City Spook

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    good! I was hoping her and Ben would be back together. I don't like her and Joe together!
    September 18th, 2011 at 04:17pm
  • Bex94

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    Wow!! That's all I can say. I've just started reading it and just wow! I love it!!!!! :)
    September 14th, 2011 at 10:05pm
  • Party City Spook

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    cliffhhannnngeerrr.
    September 4th, 2011 at 05:45am
  • Party City Spook

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    I was seriously like "Aww it's so cute and mushy... something gonna go wrong!!!" the whole time. CALLED IT. NAILED IT. LOVED IT.
    September 4th, 2011 at 02:25am
  • Party City Spook

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    D: I got so sad for Jackson. But I kinda, sorta, maybe have a bias towards him.
    September 3rd, 2011 at 03:23pm
  • Party City Spook

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    God, now I feel bad. I dated my best friend's best friend.
    September 2nd, 2011 at 06:06pm
  • QueenEmiliePlagueRat

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    honestly...i think i'm...in love with this story haha!! i love it and when Jackson punched Ben i was like ooooooo i can't wait to see what happens next!!!^_^ You're one awesome writer:)
    August 28th, 2011 at 11:37pm
  • Damn Devon

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    Thanks! :D I'll fix that right now.
    August 25th, 2011 at 08:45pm
  • divine;

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    One major thing I saw is that ALOT of your I's weren't capitalized. No mater WHAT an I should always be in caps. Either if it's I or I'm. So you should fix that.

    Missing a few quotation marks here and there too. Other then that nice.
    August 25th, 2011 at 08:44pm