You're The Reason I Still Try - Comments

The Secret Nudist (100)

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I'm not even embarassed to say I cried :'3 beautiful story.

August 25th, 2011 at 06:49am

Cynical Skin (100)

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this made me cry a little :')

August 1st, 2011 at 08:20pm

tommo. (100)

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Awh that was cute <3
poor Monte!! Dude, this was great, thanks for the entry :D ****•

July 29th, 2011 at 10:38pm

MassacreOfTheUndead (100)

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this one makes me wanna cry too [':

July 11th, 2011 at 03:08am

Stand Up And Scream (100)

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I love the emotions that Max has in the story. It really brings out his 'darker' side. I like it. (:

July 6th, 2011 at 01:24am

Something Insidious (100)

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Haha I'm enjoying this you need to update the rest Luc, don't meh hangin xD

July 5th, 2011 at 07:24pm

tommo. (100)

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Ok I've fallen in love *-*
the first chapter is great, I love how Max shows all his emotions and describes everything that's happened in the past. Also I love the layout and I also like how Max's shirt says Opium xD
This reminds me of a journal- type of story, which I like too, but I don't know if that's what you're planning on doing. You left me hanging, and I love that. It builds up my anticipation for the second chapter. I can't really rate it because it's only the first chapter, but so far, here's the rating: ****•

July 5th, 2011 at 06:27pm