You're The Reason I Still Try - Comments

I'm not even embarassed to say I cried :'3 beautiful story.

this made me cry a little :')

Awh that was cute <3
poor Monte!! Dude, this was great, thanks for the entry :D ****•

this one makes me wanna cry too [':

I love the emotions that Max has in the story. It really brings out his 'darker' side. I like it. (:

Haha I'm enjoying this you need to update the rest Luc, don't meh hangin xD

Ok I've fallen in love *-*
the first chapter is great, I love how Max shows all his emotions and describes everything that's happened in the past. Also I love the layout and I also like how Max's shirt says Opium xD
This reminds me of a journal- type of story, which I like too, but I don't know if that's what you're planning on doing. You left me hanging, and I love that. It builds up my anticipation for the second chapter. I can't really rate it because it's only the first chapter, but so far, here's the rating: ****•