I like how you made the description a simple quote, which added to the mystery of the story. It made me as the reader look forward to reading it, especially as a Band of Brothers fan. I wasn't sure if Mibba would have any decent stories about war, but I'm really happy that I found this one. Your writing style fit with the genre and it made it more realistic. Lovely story. :)
June 13th, 2013 at 03:36am