Praise I liked how you tied in the quote with the story, and I liked the layout alot. It was nice. There wasn't any bad grammar that I could tell. It was good
Critique I didn't understand what happened until the end.
July 5th, 2011 at 06:14pm
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I liked how you tied in the quote with the story, and I liked the layout alot. It was nice. There wasn't any bad grammar that I could tell. It was good
Critique
I didn't understand what happened until the end.