All Saints - Comments

Frank was Mikey's first? Did I read that correctly? Fertiles can sleep with each other? 0.o

Ryan shouldn't be surprised to see Frank and Mikey together, sure they haven't been real friends in ages, but bff's, sometimes time doesn't change things...obviously it has here, but still.

Oddly enough, I agree, Gerard has nothing to offer Frank. Frank doesn't need him, not like Gerard apparently needs him.

Can't wait for the next bit! :D

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well then....
Poor Gee,
mikey,
and frank.

I just wanted to let you know that although I haven't read this, I am going to save it as a bookmark for later tonight.

Just by reading the description, I think that I will love it~

Man oh man does it seem like shi*t hit the fan...and it's only just begun. XD

Ryan and Pete?! 0.o

I want to know what Mikey's playing at. Making Pete jealous? Or is getting with Gabe his shot at doing the "right" thing for their kind? They are mates, if I recall correctly.

Gerard so needs to get himself together, not only for his future which obviously seems to be a lack of concern, but also for what he feels or doesn't for Frank. He can't keep using him like that...it makes me sad.

PS: I think 'cause I said I didn't notice any mishaps, I found one. -.- It's in the bit where Mikey's telling Gee that he can't bring his rep down too. You have "mines" instead of "mine." Unless that was your intention, then I apologize. XD Either way, lovely updates! :D Can't wait for more!

DICK!
*points at pete*
HE'S A FUCKING DICK WAD

:( why does Gerard seem to rape Frank?
I dont read it when that happens.
Gee needs some type of control before he hurts frank.
Sorry if i make no sense it makes sense in my head.

Grrrrr! I havent got an email telling me
there's an update fr the last three updates!
Makes me mad because I like this story!
Well it was brilliant as always. Lynz seems
bitchy in this story, Mikey is a fucking whore,
Pete's gonna die, and something is going
to go fucking wrong.... Not your normal
happyish fertile/dom story... I Like This
One;D I mean i like em all but this one is
really different:D More soon pwease!:D

xo
Anita:)

0.o well...
Lyn-Z is a bitch in this story.
Why would she kill babies?
Its like killing a helpless puppy.

ohhhhhh shit,... ohhhh shit. mikeys in for it!!!!!!!!!! DOOOMMMEEDDddddddddd............ lol
update soon por favour

This is fantastic! I'm quite intrigued with this story and the tremendous amount of detail you give. I mean you've got a butt-load of people you're bouncing around, each within their own personalities and apparent vampire type--well done you!

I'm an English major and you get me so into the story context I forget to even notice if there's any mishaps...so I'll say for now, I haven't spotted any. :D It's a terrible habit of mine--apologies.

I will say though, I am totally in love with the fact that Bob's the principal. That man owns my heart (and I miss him so). XD

Naw shnap...
Mikey's preggo's.
Why must you make Pete suffer in pain?
Is it like an enjoyment to you?
:/

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wow...
Well anyways update soon.

oooooohhh! Do I see Gerard's killing side coming
out more for little Frankie?? ;D If Pete hadn't come
along, this would've actually been Gerard's first kill!!!
l : O But you have to love the way Pete finished the
human off;) Okay so I need to say this... me and my
were talking about talking over the world and basically
killing off all her exs and torutring my only ex, you know
the usual:) and I'm like, "Dude, I read fertile/dom stories
and those authors know how to fucking kill a human.
I already have like a bajillion ideas on how to torture
that fucking asshole!!!" that asshole being my cheating
ex BUUUUT that's beside the point... She had no idea
what I was talking about so I just waved it away until
she said I should be in the government, I know how my
next career move;D haha but anyways, it's people like
you that I need to thank because one day, I am gonna
end up needing a good torture/kill routine and you people
are fucking awesome enough to give them to me, so really
thank you ;D XD Update soon:D

xo
Anita:)

I love Brendon and Ryan!!! And I am into the way Gee destroyed that human and then along comes Pete finishing it off with the creepy smile. Oh I love this story. Update! Pwease?

Okay I finally sat down and read it...
^_^
its truly amazing.
I love this so much.
But damn Gee's more sadistic toward Frank in this....

Love how Brendon fit in;D A toy?!
Oh dear lord the other fertile/dom
writers would be very disappointed
-shakes head- but it's amazingly
different so I cant (and WON'T)
complain:) But I will say, for some
reason I really want Gerard to just
kick Pete's ass already... He's too
damn high up on his horse and he
needs to be brought back down...
Maybe Gerard will even cool it and
have a proper relationship;D (where
he DOESNT effing rape poor fertile
Frankie [there needs to be a fertile/dom
story where the roles are switched
and Gerard is the submissive fertile
while Frankie is the dom... just saying])
The following chapter after Brendon's
arrival was so random... I wanna know
what is was that's in Mikey's cup?! (okay
obviously vamp medicine but I meant
specifically...) and seriouisly!? How can
you not tell that Gerard hates Pete?!?
Pete's freaken awkwardness are Gee
practically gives it off and don't even
have me mention the possible rage
Gerard has (and I know Mikey fuckin
feels it :P) Yeah Mikey is definantly
stubborn in this story, but I love him so
it's totally cool and appropiate! ;;D I
just can't wait until someone flips and
kills a shitload of human (maybe Gabe
cuz no one excepts it;}) But that's just
what's going on in my screwed up mind;)
Don't pay an attention to sick, weird little
me predicting the near future in my
bizzare comment XD Okay but seriously,
update soon because I love!!! :D :D :D

xo
Anita:)

whooooooaaaaa! I like this dom/fertile
story!! It's so much more different then
the rest!!! Fucking Pete, when will you
learn man!!! Mikey is indeed a whore
in this story, everyone has had their
round with him;D Poor Frankie, being
raped but Gerard sounded so entertaining
until you wrote that chapter... but he 'slept'
with both Ways so in a way, he was asking
for it;D We have yet to meet Brendon
Urie (which I'm actually excited about!!)
so not much to say on that one yet;D
Gabe, the sweet Dom (contradiction wouldn't
you say;}) but i love it because it's different
so it's perfectly fine:D And last, but not least
Travis and William, I love it! It's cute how
William is like the Godly fertile and Travis
brutally killed Alex like the 'perfect' dom
should.... All Doms around the world
would be proud;D They really are the
ideal mates, but seriously!!! Of all the fertiles
in this story that could've been called whores,
they pick the ONLY one that's not a whore!!
Fucking brilliant!! haha, i look forward to
more really soon, I can already see I'll
falling in love with this story:D

xo
Anita:)

>.< I will read this later.....
But I'm putting the link up now...
Jesus there's a billion of these friggen stories.
(About nine)
So uhm yea....

Whoa. This is shocking. Not at all like their relationship in Red Darkness or whatever it's called. But I like it just as much. But wow. Poor Fwankie... :'(

WTF?! Gerard pretty much raped him! Actually, he did!