Twisted - Comments

Woah, where are all the comments... this is amazing. The prologue was so much different from the first chapter. It shocked me a little "My parents were murdered"... Im glad comment swap brought me here and I hope you carry on writing

I cannot believe that there aren't any comments on this page. This story is... hmm, how shall I put this?
Friggin' amazing. Yeah, that seems to work.
I love it! These things are so.... I don't know how to explain it. Different, yet familiar enough to comprehend. There are some things I'd like to see explained later, though-- what are the Fallen/the Unknown? What about the "fire people"? Are the Blood-Takers just vampires, or are they something else, some thing much more sinister?
And finally.... who is this Shadower?
I cannot wait to find out more. I'm subscribing right now-- this story is awesome!