Do You Ever Feel Cursed? - Comments

I LOVEEE... and you captured Merlin so well!!! I love you--- I mean your writing style :)

I’m going to have to start reading more Merlin fanfiction, because I really love the whole Merlin/Arthur pairing. ( Yes, thanks to you. ;) ) I loved this right from the first paragraph, because I adore fantasy and ohmigosh Arthur has wiiiings. O.O One thing to point out before I go on – there’s a half-sentence at the end of the first paragraph that needs to either be completed or removed. xD Describing the beauty of the wings was brilliant – it really put a contrast on two different kinds of beauty, and gave me insight to Arthur’s father, too. I do not like him, I’ve decided. xD I also found another mistake – He’s seen the look in his father eyes when faced with faced with magic, with sorcery. Need to get rid of the second faced with. I do that all the time; get distracted then type the same word/phrase over again. xD

I literally did something like the smiley when poor Arthur began to chop off his own wings. :( It was so sad, and again you described it so well my shoulder blades were hurting. O.o I’m also really glad that he kept his wings. Well, he had to keep his wings. It was just beautiful and angelic. Now he’s Merlin’s little angel! I adored this; it was tense and sweet and beautiful all at once.

this is really awesome. i'm in love with this show and im not even british haha. you captured the characters really well. i hope you write a full story soon!
xoxo

Oh dear I nearly cried when Arthur started hacking off his wings, but I'm precious like that and have cried in every similar circumstance in books/movies/etc lol ;__;

This deserves a far longer review than I'm able to give right now, but thank you so much <333 (esp for incorporating them feathers haha) You're amazing as always.