lol Zacky seems to like getting his ass handed to him on a plate :p
Johnny really needs to pull that stick out of his ass though - Zeph's apologized and I'm sure he heard what she just said to Zacky before she went primal on his ass.
whoooo hooooo go Brooke - she just put the fear of God into Zacky and she made him squeal like a girl :-) Damn he's an absolute pig in this and it's about time he got taken down a peg or two
Damn Zephyr really fucked up! The moment Zacky offered her a drink I knew he was up to no good. I should beat his ass for taking advantage of Zephyr. I hope that her and Johnny work it out or I will be very sad :( Anyways great update and I can't wait for the next one. Keep up the good work ladies.
oh dammit now shit's hit the fan - she should give Brookelle a slap as well because if she hadn't pulled her away from Johnny in the first place she wouldn't have been at the bar with Zacky :-( and Zacky needs a good kick to the gonads for taking advantage of Zeph while she was drunk
Ooo Zephyr gave Johnny a blow job. Well I guess that' progress haha. Well I have now read what you guys have so far and left about a million comments lol. I love this story! You guys need to update soon cuz I wanna know what happens next. Great job on this story so far guys!
Wow I think Brookelle overreacted just a little about the whole porn thing but at the same time I understand why she did. I am glad they made up though and that they finally admitted their love for eachother. I'm also glad Johnny and Zephyr admitted their love for eachother too. Love this story so much!
Aww I'm glad Johnny and Zephyr finally kissed now they need to get to the sex haha. Sorry no need to rush but I like me some sex haha. Thank you ZackyEffingVengeance for asking me to read this cuz I love it so much you both are great!
Haha I love that the girls on heat and they are suffering to control themselves I find it quite amusing. Haha Jimmy broke a museum artifact but it's a good thing he's a vampire and he can transport out of there. Aww Johnny and Zephyr dancing at the fair haha. I loved the end how Brookelle and Jimmy left at them and then ran. I love this story so much!
Omfg dammit that was only a dream! I wanted it to be real dammit! I'm sorry but I was reading the dream part and I felt the tingle and I wanted some sex! Ooo Zacky knows about the heat and he is trying to get some haha I wonder if it will happen >=) Sorry I'm such a freak haha. I am going back to read now cuz this shit is getting good.
Omfg it's about time she realized that Johnny liked her and now she is startign to realize that she likes him too. They are so damn cute! Uh oh heat huh I wonder what's going to happen haha with their super horniness. I hope there's sex haha. Yay Johnny and Zephyr may be dating hehe I'm so happy :D
Ooo Brookelle loves Jimmy! Man it must have been embarrasing for Johnny to be almost completely naked in front of Zephyr and with a boner haha. I love this story!
Lmao Johnny passed out on the roof only in his boxers. I loved how Jimmy carried him off while singing horribly lol. Damn Zephyr is being so stubborn and it's starting to piss me off. She needs to open her eyes haha. Anyways loving this. I am probably going to be done reading this before the day is over haha.