It's very lovely for a first fic. I'm highly interested to see where it is going. :)
I really hope Mikey comes back soon! He was so sweet stopping that joke, and even if he may feel a bit weary towards Frank because he's a vampire, I really hope they manage to get off on a good foot. :D
Alicia is a mean scalawag, and I highly dislike her so far. Hopefully she lightens up. As for right now, however, I wish to jam my fist into her face for being a rude cow to poor Frank. :(
I hope things look up for Frank, he is so cute! :D I'm glad he has Bob with him for the weekend. <3 :D
Hi, you. I'm excited about this -- my first fanfiction was absolutely horrific, and I think you've done a good job so far. :) Poor bb Frank though, struggling through.