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  • Omniverse

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    You did a very good job of realistically describing the main character's emotions and trains of thought. I feel like I'm reading a real person's mind. Can't wait to read more :D
    July 6th, 2011 at 04:32pm
  • Seven Shotsxxx

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    Wow, that's powerful stuff.
    July 4th, 2011 at 11:23pm
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