Athena - Comments

I can't even. I love this. I love Athena, and her fucked up little half life, and I love Christopher and I love that this isn't some perfect little story about perfect little people who lead perfect little lives. This is amazing.

Everything about this makes me want to drink Starbucks. A wonderful feeling indeed.

The layout is gorgeous, I'll just quickly say. Ugh, you just nail them perfectly every time. The banner you've used is stunning and very you too, which is always nice. It's amazing. The summary was incredibly alluring, my heart was breaking for the character already, and you hadn't even started yet. It was so short, but so powerful. I love it.

To find this written from a male perspective was sweet, to find this written from an older brother perspective was even sweeter. I'm the oldest of seven, and I just- you nailed the protective (but I still hate you!) attitude perfectly. I also have a dead sibling, although it was nothing at all like this, so I can relate to the character and the way he's feeling. This is very raw and very true to the way you'd began writing it. I loved every word, really. The part about the fan really just- it was so utterly heartbreaking and you worded it perfectly. I truly loved this piece. It's magnificent, girl. <3

I just LOVE the way you write. I want to learn how to write like you, give me lessons? ;D I love your layouts, maybe you could make one for me somtime? I love the description and how he shows the feelings he had for her after she dies.

I just LOVE the way you write. I want to learn how to write like you, give me lessons? ;D I love your layouts, maybe you could make one for me somtime? I love the description and how he shows the feelings he had for her after she dies.

I just LOVE the way you write. I want to learn how to write like you, give me lessons? ;D I love your layouts, maybe you could make one for me somtime? I love the description and how he shows the feelings he had for her after she dies.

Please oh please become an author. I promise to buy everything you publish. Everything.

I wish I could write like you do.

I love this very much!
It kept my attention the entire time I was reading it!
I love your writing style.
You describe everything perfectly!
I can't wait to read more!
I am definitely subscribing!

Jazzy. Legit. Your layouts are so beautiful that tears are running down my face. They're just so gorgeous and elegant and gah <333 I'm in luhrv. Anywhore, I love how you start your stories off in a manner that grabs the reader and doesn't let them go. I'm also in love with how you describe your characters; you make them seem fragile and lovely, but they have this edge about them that's just so enchanting. Athena is probably my new favorite character of yours :3 The relationship that she has with her brother is so...unique. I like the way he describes her, especially here: Athena usually smelt like weed and lavender, looked like a wreck and a model, and acted like a bitch and a half. Ah, brothers. Anyways, I sort of feel bad for her, how she wants to kill herself. It's just so sad. When her brother mentions that her family thought she was joking, that's the first red flag that families should look for. :/ Still, Athena is damaged and she succeeded in ending her life, but she's unique, just in the way that you've introduced her to the readers with barely any dialogue at all that really lets us into her head, and... I dunno what else to say. Your writing is so enchanting and lovely and wonderful and tragic. I'm, once again, amazed, and I can't wait for an update on this. Lovely job! <3