Falling in Reverse - Comments

So I'm here for the comment swap yeah?
I have the story and what I can say is this: You have a good foundation and I'd never discourage anyone from writing. You have got dialogue down perfectly, but you could spice it up with a tiny bit more details. That's my own opinion. Over all, I don't know the band, so that's about all the advice I can give. If you ever come back to this, you should totally finish it. :)

From comment swap.
So, this story hasn't updated in a really long time, and I'm not sure if it's abandoned or not, but I hope not. The details are kept at a regulated amount, and I really like that. I have to say that I'm not a fan of the band, and therefore I don't know much about them. So, maybe a bit of a background about the band would have been nice.

Here from the comment swap - I've never listened to The Maine, or read fabrication about them and such. Your writing is good, it doesn't go into as much detail as I usually like, but I guess that's subjective for the reader. I think that I would have enjoyed this more if I knew about the band, I just couldn't really get into it, but I do like the themes that you are exploring. Another thing is that this hasn't been updated in about a year, I don't know if you're going to finish it, but an ending would still be nice.

lol, ELI ARE YOU PREGNANT.!?!?!??

Thanks for updating!

Kennedy should be hit over the head a couple of times.... with a baseball bat.... hard!
Poor Elijah! Great chapter
:)

WHY IS KENNEDY SUCH AN ASSHOLE OMFG I WANT TO STAB HIM.
psssst, garrett and i should do some major cuddling soon
UPDATE OKAY?! <3333

I hope you update soon!
:)

I LOVE THIS, OKAY? but y0u already know that... please update?!?!?! PLEASE. I LOVE YOU.

Holy jesus, that first chapter was intense!
I can already tell that this is going to be a great story.
I love The Maine, and I'm really pleased that comment swap led me here.
In the meantime, I'm gonna keep reading but I just wanted to let you know that your story is amazing and I've definitely subscribed (:

-Jess xx

I got here due to comment swap.

I love The Maine fanfic's. I checked out the character list and saw that one of the characters was bisexual. Not that I have anything against gays or whatever, I just don't like reading slash, haha. But from the first chapter, the story is really captivating. You want to know why Elijah's brother died, and you want to know his connection with the band. Like I said, this story is really captivating from the first chapter, but because I'm not too sure if it's slash or not, I'm not going to read any further. Carry on writing though! :) xoxo

Update? I think so (:

Update? I think so (:

Thanks for updating <3

Last chapter was just too cute to handle for me :3

Update, pleeeease?!

Thanks for updating <3

OH MY GOD.
YOU ARE PERFECT.
JOHN WILL MARRY YOU NOW.
LAKDNXJDJAJSJNXSHUDJSJA
brb fangirling

omFG UPDATE

I loved this bit: "Who's asking." Garrett hollered back. "Who else has my voice?" xD
It made me laugh. I've never thought of those moments like that before haha
And I'm glad you're back!
Oh and I loved how Kennedy was pretty much insulting John's sex life
Mwhahahhaa
Why do i like people bullying John?
Meh, I don't know lol