Progress Report. - Comments

I liked this a lot:)

It was very simple, which I enjoyed a lot more than I thought I would. You've written it beautifully. The layouts nice and clean, as well. Very great job. <3

hon, if you don't win this contest i am protesting. it's official. you're like a god or something. your writing is freakin' ethereal.

I love the simplicity here, and how the story is just a quick glimspe into their lives and yet manages to show a lot about their relatiohship, espessially the bit How they’d make up and another of their nine lives would be lost and their time was running out. The last two lines are really effective; it really gives the story a bittersweet feeling.

Good luck with the contest!

I'm delighted you entered this in a contest and I hope it done well, because I can imagine it would. You are very descriptive, and I like that. I don't like a story that makes me have to imagine to much, or that gives me to much. Your's had great balance. I also loved the section with Pete and the girl and when he looked at the pills and got that realization.
The layout is really nice too, very simple but so suited to the shot. Awesome!