August 2nd, 2011 at 10:06pm
"You've Already Written It!" Prewrite Contest:
Layout: The layout was nice and simple.
Content: This was sooo sad :( i like how you told so much in so few words. I like the last sentence...it was probably my favorite in the whole drabble!
Spelling/Grammar/Vocabulary: I didn't find any mistakes, but you didn't use any big words or anything.
Overall: This was well-written. :)
I love the color scheme, usually red and green makes me think of Christmas, but something about the way the colors are used stops that thought from happening.
Story
Oh, wow. Usually when I review I do it paragraph by paragraph, but there is not enough to say for that. Honestly, something about this was just purely breath taking. I usually have a lot more to say, even for drabbles, but all I can tell you is that this is impressive. I love it, I love it because it’s relatable and realistic and it happens. I love it because it happens in life. The whole thing about the bathroom is realistic, because not all apartments are what you see on t.v. and people don’t always understand that.
Overall
Just amazing.