You're Okay - Comments

Wow that was spectacular. I love how you personified the drug and how it was all sweet and 'encouraging' in the beginning but then it gets annoyed with the user. Keep writing stories like this, you're great at it. :D

This was just absolutely brilliant. The idea of the whole story was lovely. It was well-written. Amazing. :)

Piers, this is stunning. This is just... I don't really have words, but this caught me. You described a situation that I've never been in so well that I feel like I know it, and that's a good accomplishment. this was great.