Better Off As Lovers - Comments

Lexington. (100)

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Oh gurl :o

July 22nd, 2011 at 09:20pm

isabellerazor (100)

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This was sooo cute! I loved it. Its really good. :)

July 7th, 2011 at 09:22pm

sourwolf. (100)

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i loved this. it was simple and lovely.
and i think you did a great job :]
<3

July 7th, 2011 at 09:20pm

Skwahdala (100)

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That was awesome! I love Giani, I just wanna squeeze him 'til his head pops off.
Stupid cheating boyfriends XP

Oh, a couple little nitpicky things:
"Weather it's coming with me to my brothers grave" <--"whether" and "brother's"

July 7th, 2011 at 05:30pm

Jack-Likes-Thrust (100)

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This is soo cute! :3
I love it!
Hehe, I love the 'Conversation Starter'

July 7th, 2011 at 11:00am

bones n' feathers. (100)

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oooooooooooooooo
i love this! o;

July 7th, 2011 at 01:46am

Skwahdala (100)

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I love it so far my darling~~~ can't wait to read the rest and see how it turns out (never heard the other two songs so it's more of a surprise XD)
One issue I caught: "this amazing man who's eyes" would be "whose eyes"

July 6th, 2011 at 09:13am